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Comments posted by: Demonikaess, 29 Jun 2006 12:27 am - ..... talk aboug pressure..... Demonikaess, 29 Jun 2006 12:28 am - ok.. you need ONE more page.. that will transition from this page to the next page.. cuz OTHERWISE its... toooooooo ABRUPT... if you want more details i'll explain it in an email or when i come back home this weekend to visit PJupiter, 29 Jun 2006 10:23 am - hmm i'm kinda mixed on if i should or not because i kinda like it being abrupt it makes it show a little bit of how she either a) tries not to let it bother her or b) how maybe she's used to her parent's acting that way... because if she dwells on it in the next page it wouldn't really show that.. but.. argh! then again what can go wrong with having another page?.. eheh errr.. anyway maybe i'll add another one.. we'll see! Demonikaess, 30 Jun 2006 12:33 am - well i mean the next page should be like... her teacher being like.. if you dont get your grades up .. blah blah blah.. (Insert some punishment).. and then her leaving the office to go back to her classes.... she doesnt have to dwell on it.. she just has to .. go back to classes kinda?.. Cuz i dunno.. it just seems so damn abrupt Lyceq, 03 Jul 2006 12:37 am Allow me to concur - Showing a transition would be alot easier in an animation. Maybe you could simply insert a little box that says "Later..." or "After school." Even though she says it already, I think the first thing the reader sees should let them know. PJupiter, 03 Jul 2006 02:31 pm - oh fine! fine fine fine! you snobbery snob snobbers! i'll do that -_- |
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