 |
|
The fates seem to have forgotten about 2 planets that had been under their power, and without fate they have spiraled into two very very different cultures. Now with the fates full attention, very strange things are about to happen. Unfortunately for two girls, they are the first to experience it.
|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
 |
 |
 |
The Management says:
PJupiter, 05 Jun 2006 06:17 pm
|
- and well as you can see i'm remaking it so that the fates are actually different ages and well they're more involved then the last ones.. errr.. yeah! eheh..
ooh and now it's easily understandable why they lost track of those two planets in the first place.. easily distracted women!! eheh
Comments posted by:
Sechan, 05 Jun 2006 07:30 pm
Looks interesting - The introduction is a little confusing. Like...it has the potential to be a lot better. It explains everything, but switches so frequently, the way the text is oriented makes it very confusing. lol. Definitely keeping an eye on this one, though! ^_~
PJupiter, 05 Jun 2006 08:03 pm
- err i guess the text might be placed a little confusingly.. I'M SORRY! ehe .. well... err. darn it!
Demonikaess, 07 Jun 2006 10:39 pm
eheh - I think the text is fine, its good.. but i do think that maybe an extra page of explination would help ehehe..(although since we've talked alot about this one i'm completely know whats going on.. however other people may not be on the same wavelenght as us.. *Sigh* ehehhe)
Lyceq, 02 Jul 2006 11:53 pm
Demonikaess types too fast! - That or your fingers are fat. It is interesting how the pattern on the shirt of the middle aged fate failes to scale in porportion to the fate herself. And the youngest fates eyes do look creepy. It's also interesting that not even the fates are able to have a paper-less society.
PJupiter, 03 Jul 2006 02:20 pm
- heheh i LOVE the papers!! i think it really has a symbolism of how they really aren't as advanced and capable as they should be (hence not paying attention to the planets as they were supposed to be)
and ya like i said the cloaks are magic and well her shirt is too... ehehe
dotless, 11 Mar 2007 05:52 pm
- I just love this... first it's all serious and then this random outburst
PJupiter, 13 Mar 2007 05:29 pm
- eheh ya!! XD
|
Hosted by | site design by
|
|
|